Topic: soul vein
jimz's photo
Tue 03/08/11 08:20 AM
queen of light sleeps in my naked prayer
i hold her ghost in my soul
she lives in my grave filled with the wind of voices
she turned into a cloud of blood that flows in my soul vein

i breathe in her tornado as she possesses my imagination
i am strung up in her eyes
i am carried by her sounds of a silence of a scream
in an endless white sea speaking in words that cry like baby angels

Simonedemidova's photo
Tue 03/08/11 09:29 AM
Wow, like true love after death, very well written.

jimz's photo
Tue 03/08/11 10:36 AM

Wow, like true love after death, very well written.


wow, such a cool thing to say
thanks

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Tue 03/08/11 12:15 PM
I agree jim that was excellent my friend :thumbsup: glasses drinker

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Wed 03/09/11 09:27 AM
like the words,jimz..........teasingbrunette

kirk443's photo
Wed 03/09/11 06:05 PM
nice write i got the feeling of a entity possession.

kirk443's photo
Wed 03/09/11 06:05 PM
drinker

nice write i got the feeling of a entity possession.