Topic: Afterthoughts Cause Aftershocks
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Wed 03/09/11 06:57 PM
What’s the angle you say, sifted by thoughts of insanity gone mainstream.

She arranged a path to the bath with petals from a garden I recently dreamed.

Most effectual as her bid’s the best I’ve heard in eons, heart & mind’s weak.

Intrinsic rhythmic splendidly terrific & gifted this chicks good times like Chic.

I wanna die dancing, yes this would be a good way for me to go.

After romancing cynics often fail following the road with an obvious glow.

Rather freeze on sight in spite of the long kiss goodnight promising a fresh start.

Afterthoughts cause aftershocks awkward laughter mocks what’s truly inside your heart.

Holding back counteracts natural facts of passionate wishes granted in life’s journey.

Knowing lonely times are taxing & plentiful should assure that your body’s worthy.

Jealousy's a Love felony for which the penance’s cold & bitter loneliness.

Question not the motive as this interior meltdown clearly reveals exterior homeliness.

Verbal sounds abruptly adjust as your words now don't build they just bust trust.

Chemistry between us is a must or soon it's ashes to ashes & dust to dust.

Don't be so quick not considering ones cusp.

It'll delineate itself in time with no big rush or fuss.

Riddles hold you at bay while effectively enticing us into wrong choices.

I plan a risky escape, fueled by verses spoken in my head with unsavory voices.

She said “my cakes the moistest, stick your finger in the bowl take a taste test”.

I had to decline though she’s damn fine I respect mine a lot this keeps me blessed.

No contest, as my will focused knows very little reproach.

Brutally honest, creatively selfless, scary at times the taboo topics I’m not shy to broach.

Not braggadocios, don’t boast in life for my children I just want the most.

It’s so busy in my Oakland city luckily I live life so very close to the coast.

A getaway’s not faraway a different scene really can work wonders.

It permits a respite of refocus to recoup from realities reoccurring blunders.

So easily we go under with the daily grind steadily rocking on our shoulders.

Help you give others will in turn lift your burden making pebbles out of those boulders.

jimz's photo
Thu 03/10/11 09:17 AM
alrightglasses

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Thu 03/10/11 03:05 PM
Now that kept me reading i liked that alotflowerforyou . I love that picture also flowerforyou

brwnkimba's photo
Thu 03/10/11 05:52 PM
Thank you much gentlemen.

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Thu 03/10/11 07:40 PM
Excellent..flowerforyou

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Thu 03/10/11 09:07 PM
drinker YOU the man dude,,NICE write..

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Sun 03/13/11 07:10 AM
Thanks Ainjelhappy& glad you enjoyed it iam4u thank you very much my Brother!!!

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Mon 03/14/11 12:24 PM
Namaste'

May all that you seek shine light upon the footprints:heart: