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Kissesz's photo
Tue 03/29/11 04:06 PM
I haven't written a poem in years. embarassed

This is in no particular format, completely random, but it does mean something to me.


Why can't they see
When shes playful and lighthearted
They have rolled the die
That is in fact, just the face it has displayed
When they roll it tomorrow
Intriguing, sensitive, imaginative she will be
Once more the next day
Nervous, in need of reassurance, in need of affection possibly
You see,
She can be
Who ever she chooses to be
Who ever she feels to be
When ever she feels it necessary
Like a chameleon
So easy to change
Blending in everywhere with swiftness and ease
But if you decide, to choose a favorite of these
You will be left like the others
Away with the breeze
Yes quickly, that easily.






HardDrrive's photo
Tue 03/29/11 04:30 PM
Hello :)

I must admit that i was taken aback to find someone out here who could actually be really creative in English and still make sense!
Your poem was very thought provoking. It made me realize that although our lives and the way we behave is in our hands, sometimes its just the opposite and we rather seem to be controlled by our moods and things that happen around that affect us.
Unfortunately, people seem to care more about what other people think about them and so are in a constant state of doubt. Little do they realize that a strong character is actually the pioneer who does it all differently.
Like you. Thanks for the great poem. And Id be happy if I knew your name, miss.

Queene123's photo
Tue 03/29/11 04:39 PM

I haven't written a poem in years. embarassed

This is in no particular format, completely random, but it does mean something to me.


Why can't they see
When shes playful and lighthearted
They have rolled the die
That is in fact, just the face it has displayed
When they roll it tomorrow
Intriguing, sensitive, imaginative she will be
Once more the next day
Nervous, in need of reassurance, in need of affection possibly
You see,
She can be
Who ever she chooses to be
Who ever she feels to be
When ever she feels it necessary
Like a chameleon
So easy to change
Blending in everywhere with swiftness and ease
But if you decide, to choose a favorite of these
You will be left like the others
Away with the breeze
Yes quickly, that easily.









i added to your poem


you may have reasons
to see what has been ahead
as feeling lost in your own
little soul
as a new day may arise
but yet you have time
to blend in with loved
ones that wish to be near
but yet there may had been changes
when another comes your way
to make you feel negative
when it was not to had even been
so you quickly change
for your ownself and not others
to make them feel hey i can change her/him
thats not the story that shall be told
you choose of who you are
and not others that tend to change
your true way

Loy822's photo
Tue 03/29/11 04:42 PM
Very nice.

Kissesz's photo
Tue 03/29/11 05:07 PM

Hello :)

I must admit that i was taken aback to find someone out here who could actually be really creative in English and still make sense!
Your poem was very thought provoking. It made me realize that although our lives and the way we behave is in our hands, sometimes its just the opposite and we rather seem to be controlled by our moods and things that happen around that affect us.
Unfortunately, people seem to care more about what other people think about them and so are in a constant state of doubt. Little do they realize that a strong character is actually the pioneer who does it all differently.
Like you. Thanks for the great poem. And Id be happy if I knew your name, miss.



Thank you for taking the time in reading. flowerforyou I agree, caring too much or all the time about what other people think can cloud our perspective of who we really are.







i added to your poem


you may have reasons
to see what has been ahead
as feeling lost in your own
little soul
as a new day may arise
but yet you have time
to blend in with loved
ones that wish to be near
but yet there may had been changes
when another comes your way
to make you feel negative
when it was not to had even been
so you quickly change
for your ownself and not others
to make them feel hey i can change her/him
thats not the story that shall be told
you choose of who you are
and not others that tend to change
your true way


Thank you for adding! smooched I really enjoyed reading it over and over. It's great advice and carries a wonderful message. flowerforyou






Very nice.


Thank you for reading flowerforyou

no photo
Tue 03/29/11 05:41 PM
Edited by iam4u on Tue 03/29/11 06:36 PM
:heart: I met this chameleon, so sweet her tongue of lies,
so giving with everything she had, she was never down or sad.
I gave her everything I had, with all that implies..
She was my light, my soul-mate,to finally be at my side.
Then I found out, she had way to many things to hide.
Now we're apart, as I carry what's lift of my heart.:broken-heart:


Great write,,My friend,,laugh :heart:


grumble IF,,I'd only read THIS a year ago,,,,laugh


Thanks for sharing.....flowerforyou

Kissesz's photo
Tue 03/29/11 06:16 PM

:heart: I met this chameleon, so sweet her tounge of lies,
so giving with everything she had, she was never down or sad.
I gave her everything I had, with all that implies..
She was my light, my soul-mate,to finally be at my side.
Then I found out, she had way to many things to hide.
Now we're apart, as I carry what's lift of my heart.brokenheart


Great write,,My friend,,laugh :heart:


grumble IF,,I'd only read THIS a year ago,,,,laugh


Thanks for sharing.....flowerforyou



Awwwwww what a sad poem!! ohwell I'm sorry :cry:

But...not all chameleons are the same flowers


no photo
Tue 03/29/11 06:43 PM
:heart: :wink: I know,,THATS why I'mstill here,,,,
But thank you for adding to my thoughts as to know,,nice ladies do come around....drinker