Topic: love - life - sin
d4tc's photo
Sun 08/07/11 04:31 PM







I'm happy when I'm - smyulin

No sad face from a - violin

I talk to those that - dial in

Where I am - is where I've been

The hero in your heroine

The needle narrowed arrowed in

The sparrow that floats bound to wind

The sound that follows hallowed in

Breaking glass or porcelain

Scuffed n' cuffed and rough within


This love of life

This life of sin

A life of love

I love to win


Even humbled when I'm struggle'in

Rumble'in and grumble'in

This pain I've made - I'm stomach'in

No wonder I am wander'in

Through thoughts I think I'm ponder'in

Like pedals falling off a stem

The light I see is growing dim

When lowering my sober chin

with a silly side smirked grin

only God knows where - and who I am




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Mon 08/08/11 08:09 PM
I like how you changed the smiling spelling to match with violin..Awesome...

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Mon 08/08/11 08:19 PM
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

ArtGurl's photo
Mon 08/08/11 09:01 PM
I can feel the beat flowerforyou

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Mon 08/08/11 09:36 PM
Nice....drinker smokin

d4tc's photo
Wed 08/10/11 04:38 PM
thanks up2us, sherrie, tazz and ainjel (lol)happy

lurchs_sister's photo
Wed 08/10/11 09:26 PM
Another story so true to life it makes me ache.
The rhythm gives it lifesmooched

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Thu 08/11/11 06:21 AM
drinker Always cool:smile: drinker

d4tc's photo
Thu 08/11/11 07:00 PM
thank you
2km & Vicky

:banana:

bastet126's photo
Fri 08/12/11 07:02 AM
love the way the beat just carries you thru ~ flowerforyou

d4tc's photo
Fri 08/12/11 06:29 PM
thanks bastet flowerforyou

laura329's photo
Sun 08/14/11 04:41 AM
That was a great one!!! Loved it!flowerforyou