Topic: These Are They
afriQueen22's photo
Sun 11/06/11 02:07 AM
They look but do not see. Barefoot, dirty. Another lost cause on another street.

They hear without listening. Pleas for help blending in with city sounds. Her cries no longer a solo but a part of an everyday symphony.

They judge without knowledge. Born in hell, raised by the devil. Out of sheer desperation, she jumped out of the pan, and into the fire.

They pity without empathy. Her pain is an insult to their existance. Leftover sandwiches tossed hastily at her feet. Good deed done. They can sleep well tonight.

goodmonkey4u's photo
Sun 11/06/11 02:15 AM
just a quick read out of curiousity... not bad... you have talent.. keep trying to improve.. wish u all the best

afriQueen22's photo
Sun 11/06/11 02:23 AM

just a quick read out of curiousity... not bad... you have talent.. keep trying to improve.. wish u all the best


Thank you

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Sun 11/06/11 06:41 AM
drinker :thumbsup:

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Sun 11/06/11 07:28 AM
A excellent short write, that speaks volumes......flowerforyou
The sharp blade of a pen, in the hand of a very talented writer.
That cuts deeply into the heart, mind, and soul of the reader.

afriQueen22's photo
Sun 11/06/11 07:41 AM

A excellent short write, that speaks volumes......flowerforyou
The sharp blade of a pen, in the hand of a very talented writer.
That cuts deeply into the heart, mind, and soul of the reader.



:smile: flowerforyou