My first poem was a bit to ambiguous to fully comprehend without my assistance, Thanks to those of you who wrote back, i appreciate it! Heres one thats a bit more romantic..


our faces beamed lecherous 

watching, as the cloud drives the wave
out from the waters of copulation
screaming ecstasy - tantalizing tease
I am your scream


She smiled, as i waited
her brow looking like that of a soft bird dwelling distantly in some painting
her smile(which came seldom), had me forgetting my dull hardships
bring me through your gentle rain my sweet songbird
your day is my kingdom, and i am your lover
i want your soul to dance forever in my clenched fist
even in death i hope to feel your soft breath coming over my morning ears
the gentle patterns of your angel breath beat
was once before written in dreams