Topic: A shooting Star, so lasting.
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Tue 02/21/12 12:12 PM
Edited by iam4u on Tue 02/21/12 12:18 PM
Your my real, in a world so fake.
Giving me everything,
you could never, forsake.
All your kisses,hugs and smiles.
Give me reason,
for my long days of endless miles.
Baby, it's you who feeds my desire.
Living out here,
in this world filled with, pain, rain and fire.
Honey its you, who I've found so true.
Believing in me, giving me, all of you.
God Himself, made you so real,
It's that you, no one can steal.
Inside your heart,
is the complete love,
the only love,
your heart could ever make.
You give me everything,
that I could never,,,,, take.:heart:

thewaterbearer's photo
Tue 02/21/12 12:14 PM
Lovely write, it got me right in the heartflowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Tue 02/21/12 12:29 PM
Ditto Terry. :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Tue 02/21/12 12:33 PM
I really like this one Terry...A love poem!!!flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

Sin_and_Sorrow's photo
Tue 02/21/12 02:28 PM

I really like this one Terry...A love poem!!!flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou


I'm with her.

:)

<3

tara48's photo
Tue 02/21/12 05:22 PM

Your my real, in a world so fake.
Giving me everything,
you could never, forsake.
All your kisses,hugs and smiles.
Give me reason,
for my long days of endless miles.
Baby, it's you who feeds my desire.
Living out here,
in this world filled with, pain, rain and fire.
Honey its you, who I've found so true.
Believing in me, giving me, all of you.
God Himself, made you so real,
It's that you, no one can steal.
Inside your heart,
is the complete love,
the only love,
your heart could ever make.
You give me everything,
that I could never,,,,, take. Very nice write Terry,:heart:

flowers

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Tue 02/21/12 06:42 PM
TWB,TAZZ,LEIGH,
TARA,and SIN..
Thank YOU ALL MUCH,,Because its THESE,,,YOU REPLIES,,that help me feel I'm not just giving three and four hours of my life away,,when making them..YOUR replies MAKE ME FEEL,,,YOUR HEARTS..Thanks
:heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:




Sometimes when trying to work a thought out,,inside your mind.
You stumble across a phrase,,that just STOPS YOU,,in its WOW?
and in THAT,,it was my last sentence,,which built all that was above it..

You give me everything, I could never take.....


for all the feelings and ways inside us ALL,,make us WHO we are as a person..and its WITH THEM,,we shall ALL die still holding them,within..

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Tue 02/21/12 07:09 PM
wow, nice and smooth and deep, i need a beer. :) it is a uplifter for me. *smiles*

good write i really enjoyed reading it!

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Tue 02/21/12 07:18 PM

wow, nice and smooth and deep, i need a beer. :) it is a uplifter for me. *smiles*

good write i really enjoyed reading it!
drinker Drink one for me Kirk,,and thanks man.
I HOPE you been doing good,,its been awhile since I seen ya here.
keep on being and smiling bro...drinker