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Topic: In awe of you
spokenword Joined Wed 09/26/12 Posts: 6	Sat 09/29/12 09:21 PM
I can see you there Behind your facade Your kindness and grace compassion and love The one I fall for when I see it in raw your light is beyond what leaves me in awe Your voice is serene and hypnotic It makes me forget all reason and logic Your eyes tell a story I wish I could read I'm sure it would leave me so weak in the knees I see you- in wonder you leave me confused I love you dear stranger For just being You.

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Sat 09/29/12 10:24 PM
nice writes

spokenword Joined Wed 09/26/12 Posts: 6	Sat 09/29/12 10:40 PM
Thank you kindly.

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Sat 09/29/12 11:01 PM
Yes, nice write..

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Sun 09/30/12 04:54 AM


mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1532	Mon 10/01/12 02:18 AM
I can see you there Behind your facade Your kindness and grace compassion and love The one I fall for when I see it in raw your light is beyond what leaves me in awe Your voice is serene and hypnotic It makes me forget all reason and logic Your eyes tell a story I wish I could read I'm sure it would leave me so weak in the knees I see you- I really enjoyed this . . . and welcome in wonder you leave me confused I love you dear stranger For just being You.

plastic_pancakes Joined Sun 10/18/09 Posts: 7399	Mon 10/01/12 06:39 AM
Hits like a hammer. Awesome write. Welcome to mingle.

spokenword Joined Wed 09/26/12 Posts: 6	Mon 10/01/12 11:07 PM
Thank you kindly :)

spokenword Joined Wed 09/26/12 Posts: 6	Mon 10/01/12 11:08 PM


spokenword Joined Wed 09/26/12 Posts: 6	Mon 10/01/12 11:08 PM
Wow. thanks!

seeking_serendipity Joined Sun 08/26/12 Posts: 63	Thu 10/04/12 04:40 AM
don't know which one is more attractive and eye catching ...your looks or your pen...they don't have a salute smiley here, or else would have loved to use that for your literary endeavours

Kaleijoscope Joined Fri 10/15/10 Posts: 3319	Thu 10/04/12 05:20 AM
a very much welcome addition to mingle's poet society...

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