Topic: Haven't We Met
Sharris's photo
Tue 10/02/12 11:15 PM
Haven't we Met

Big ole moon
in the clear lit sky
staring back at me
in full clarity.

Yes, we've been here before
swimming alone
devoid of touch

We haven't changed
old souls
familiar.
Dismissing what was
rejecting what might have been.

A realist, this austere globe
suspended
reflecting in these pools.

Making love fully clothed
naked denial
Jasmine whispers, sultry
brushing against my parch.

I oblige.
Black aubergine drapes
vast is his dark silence.

I remember, now.
I remember.

SadieLu12

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Wed 10/03/12 03:23 AM
In the Mystic Moonlight. . .flowerforyou :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Sun 10/07/12 03:56 PM
makinglove fully clothed.....

verynice write...

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Mon 10/08/12 06:59 AM
Wonderful Sadie..

Sharris's photo
Fri 10/26/12 08:50 AM
Thank you, all of you. You encourage me in ways some words cannot.
Love, s

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Fri 10/26/12 08:58 AM
You write so pretty Sadie!smitten

Sharris's photo
Fri 10/26/12 09:00 AM

You write so pretty Sadie!smitten

awwww shucks...Thank you...How are you?

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Fri 10/26/12 09:04 AM


You write so pretty Sadie!smitten

awwww shucks...Thank you...How are you?


Good thanks!happy ....,Enjoying a beautiful fall and planning (coordinating) holiday get togethers..

Sharris's photo
Fri 10/26/12 09:09 AM



You write so pretty Sadie!smitten

awwww shucks...Thank you...How are you?


Good thanks!happy ....,Enjoying a beautiful fall and planning (coordinating) holiday get togethers..

I've got a wedding..my son on 12/21...that is my holidays

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Fri 10/26/12 10:27 AM




You write so pretty Sadie!smitten

awwww shucks...Thank you...How are you?


Good thanks!happy ....,Enjoying a beautiful fall and planning (coordinating) holiday get togethers..

I've got a wedding..my son on 12/21...that is my holidays


Congrats to your son Sadie...My one and only got married this past March..Took her 43 years to find the right one!:heart:

Sharris's photo
Fri 10/26/12 03:14 PM





You write so pretty Sadie!smitten

awwww shucks...Thank you...How are you?


Good thanks!happy ....,Enjoying a beautiful fall and planning (coordinating) holiday get togethers..

I've got a wedding..my son on 12/21...that is my holidays


Congrats to your son Sadie...My one and only got married this past March..Took her 43 years to find the right one!:heart:

Happiness is worth all that.

d4tc's photo
Fri 10/26/12 09:42 PM
we met on a sadderday

you turned it into a funday

we made up words
and listened to new classics
over an old ipod

i was taking swigs off a stolen wine bottle
and you were eloquenty sipping out of it

we through the word giddy around
a few times without saying a thing

it was a nice day to walk

but
we sat under a bareleafed tree
and pretended me were shady

it was something

something i remember vividly
in my imagination

as the day began to nod off --

i stared at each and every star at once
and you counted them all in my eyes

we shared an apple

bite for bite

a snake slithered by
and it made us think

i could tell what you were thinking
but cannot remember my thought

an unawkward silence lingered

somewhere out of nowhere

we laughed with our toes

as the wind
brushed through you're hair

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Sat 10/27/12 03:28 AM
Edited by Up2Us on Sat 10/27/12 03:31 AM
d4tc...nice input. :smile:


Very beautiful write Sharris.....flowerforyou

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Sharris's photo
Sat 10/27/12 06:21 PM

we met on a sadderday

you turned it into a funday

we made up words
and listened to new classics
over an old ipod

i was taking swigs off a stolen wine bottle
and you were eloquenty sipping out of it

we through the word giddy around
a few times without saying a thing

it was a nice day to walk

but
we sat under a bareleafed tree
and pretended me were shady

it was something

something i remember vividly
in my imagination

as the day began to nod off --

i stared at each and every star at once
and you counted them all in my eyes

we shared an apple

bite for bite

a snake slithered by
and it made us think

i could tell what you were thinking
but cannot remember my thought

an unawkward silence lingered

somewhere out of nowhere

we laughed with our toes

as the wind
brushed through you're hair

So down to the toes on this one. I love it...Who says you can't see the moon in daylight...

Teditis's photo
Wed 01/30/13 05:52 PM

Haven't we Met

Big ole moon
in the clear lit sky
staring back at me
in full clarity.

Yes, we've been here before
swimming alone
devoid of touch

We haven't changed
old souls
familiar.
Dismissing what was
rejecting what might have been.

A realist, this austere globe
suspended
reflecting in these pools.

Making love fully clothed
naked denial
Jasmine whispers, sultry
brushing against my parch.

I oblige.
Black aubergine drapes
vast is his dark silence.

I remember, now.
I remember.

SadieLu12

Very nice...flowerforyou
I call it "her" though.

I remember too...