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As clouds collide just you and I
stand to fall give into it all. Listening to natures call of lust and passion those nights together in a haunting fashion. Six year alone I finally gave in gave into the flesh; the flesh of sins longing for that one's touch didn't know I missed it that much. All those night we never did sleep once I left you had to creep. You crept along to something new barely two hours after I left you. I was just moving away telling you that I would stay. By your actions spoke louder when you ****ed my friend in the shower. She called and left her speaker on so I could hear it on my phone. I did not get mad you broke my heart by let's face it it was doomed from the start. |
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write 10-30 of such poems, dont publicize them until they're all done and fine-tuned.
put em in an ebook. you might make some money, you might not. but here, you definitely won't. |
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Hi Sarah, with friends like that... huh? From the beginning to the end your message resonates.
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Edited by
sarah26sexton
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Sat 12/01/12 02:04 AM
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@ ScrambledIggz I am not looking to make money just trying to give a little insight as to who I am feeling and that I am actually kind of smart. However on these dating we all know that guys would rather have someone who is a bimbo versus someone like me. But thank you for you comment.
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Edited by
sarah26sexton
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Sat 12/01/12 02:05 AM
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@ AthenaRose2
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Sarah, I understand exactly how you feel, and felt then. Chances are those two already had something going to get together before the dust was even off your shoes. And for a girlfriend to throw it in your face like that... well.. you know... I'm with you too on writing for expression and camaraderie, sharing with friends here in the moment... and I hope to read more of your work on the threads... but, I'll see you on facebook 2..
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