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Have you ever looked into her eyes
And ever wonder oh dear my If this will be and it will last To live the dream just you and i To breath together hand in hand To let you sleep on my left side And hold you close for all lifetime. |
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Have you ever looked into her eyes And ever wonder oh dear my If this will be and it will last To live the dream just you and i To breath together hand in hand To let you sleep on my left side And hold you close for all lifetime. okay, normal.. I feel kinda weird posting to this one becuz I'll never look into her eyes and wonder...lol... but.. I can't just let this write slip by either... without calling dibs on which side of the bed... I sleep on the right side.. so I'm automatically disqualified to sleep on the left... hehehehe.. but seriously... I do get the gist of what you're saying.. and it's nice to see a man who lays his feelings and desires on the table.. ![]()
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Aye, I like that you're sharing more.
Exposing your heart, practicing your craft. It's a nice write... I vaguely remember those moments and feelings from long ago... thankx for reminding me.
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Edited by
Teditis
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Thu 01/31/13 01:45 PM
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Ack, a triple post... sorry.
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Edited by
Teditis
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Thu 01/31/13 01:45 PM
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Have you ever looked into her eyes And ever wonder oh dear my If this will be and it will last To live the dream just you and i To breath together hand in hand To let you sleep on my left side And hold you close for all lifetime. okay, normal.. I feel kinda weird posting to this one becuz I'll never look into her eyes and wonder...lol... but.. I can't just let this write slip by either... without calling dibs on which side of the bed... I sleep on the right side.. so I'm automatically disqualified to sleep on the left... hehehehe.. but seriously... I do get the gist of what you're saying.. and it's nice to see a man who lays his feelings and desires on the table.. ![]()
She gets the left since this way we she sleeps at night upon my chest she can listen how my heart beats just for her.
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Aye, I like that you're sharing more. Exposing your heart, practicing your craft. It's a nice write... I vaguely remember those moments and feelings from long ago... thankx for reminding me.
Your welcome and i hope they made u happy and not sad. |
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I like this one 2. Its the big question we all ask @some point.
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Simple, elegant and direct I like it.
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Im gAld u both liked it
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The eyes are the windows to the soul.....they tell you so much....your write expresses a wish for answers in those eyes....short, sweet, and straight to the point. Nice job!
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Yes the eyes always tell the truth. Im happy you liked and thank you for reading hope to have more up soon.
Keep your eyes open. |
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