Topic: Poison the Well
FearandLoathing's photo
Sat 03/16/13 01:23 AM
Marching shoulder to shoulder in place,
Not moving forward but rather standing still.

The duck becomes confused and wanders backwards,
Like a bird that has no bearing or direction.

Delivering fate from the skies above,
Sentenced to their future by an invisible jury.

The fires rise up as the hate hits its peak,
Watch it wildly leap up and over your security.

The trees are bleeding and on their knees,
My rivers are drying up and beginning to leave.

You are raping and destroying everything I love,
I am making sure that you will remember me.

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Sat 03/16/13 02:42 AM
Ouch! This one bites.. intensely... destructive forces are always at work, and you are making your voice heard... really cool verse... :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

DaySinner's photo
Sat 03/16/13 08:20 PM
Edited by DaySinner on Sat 03/16/13 08:22 PM

Delivering fate from the skies above,
Sentenced to their future by an invisible jury.

The fires rise up as the hate hits its peak,
Watch it wildly leap up and over your security

Inexorable destruction looms! Especially like the power expressed in these lines. :thumbsup:

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Sat 03/16/13 08:44 PM
"..The trees are bleeding and on their knees.."

As DS said, powerfully expressive alright Fear...Great write..

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Sun 03/17/13 07:43 AM
you make it visible..

oldhippie1952's photo
Sun 03/17/13 07:45 AM
It makes me think this is how we are destroying the Earth.

FearandLoathing's photo
Sun 03/17/13 08:31 PM
When in doubt...Bang on a lot of trash cans and light a few fires.

Thank you each for your comments, equally as valued yet greatly appreciated...Thank you, again.

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Mon 03/18/13 08:54 AM
"Delivering fate from the skies above "
hehehe that sounds like what the birds do to me sometimes...
I like it !

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