Topic: Such a lucky girl
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Sat 06/15/13 08:27 AM
I look up into the night sky
And I'm thinking about how lucky I am
You just make me feel like the luckiest girl in the world
I'm so glad to know I'm his

You barely even knew me
I barely knew you
But it's like I know everything

A million stars up in the sky
One shines brighter I cant deny
You make me feel like I am that star ^_^
You have a special way of making me feel more valuable than I believe I am
Your soul is the essence of the Sky and Earth
I always admire all that you do
Someone whom I thought didn't exist
I guess I'm just such a lucky girl

The happiest person in the world is that what you'd make me
My love is the tide, your soul is the shores ^_^
Forever for you I'll wait till my hand is in yours :)(:
And I guess I'm just...
Such a lucky girl
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This is my first, forgive me if its bad. ^_^


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Sat 06/15/13 09:56 AM
Like it !
Nice sentiment

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Sat 06/15/13 10:12 AM
beautiful. i m speechless.

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Sat 06/15/13 07:58 PM
Thankyou Kik & Vj, i think this is the worst poem ever :c

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Sat 06/15/13 10:32 PM
That was beautiful poem, I especially love this part:

"My love is the tide, your soul is the shores ^_^
Forever for you I'll wait till my hand is in yours :)(:"

I liked it very much :D

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Sun 06/16/13 07:00 AM
flowers :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Mon 06/17/13 02:18 AM
Princess . . .

Very warming and sincere. What an absolutely beautiful poem, my friend. Well done! Keep ' spinning ' those pros and such. I remain with you, by your side as a fellow writer of parchment and pen.

flowers tommy boy / Ireland / Mon. June 17th, 2013 at, 10:15 AM - Ireland time.

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Mon 06/17/13 03:25 AM
, .and wh0's the lucky man ? ?:-D ,. W0rds of admirati0n . .nice 0ne 13asianprincess13 .

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Mon 06/17/13 03:37 AM
Very nice, enjoyed

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Mon 06/17/13 05:15 AM
flowers very nice sprinkle star i like it

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Mon 06/17/13 06:05 AM
This is a love poem...Spoken from the heart in truth and purity, how can your words be anything less than beautiful!...flowerforyou

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Mon 06/17/13 07:53 AM
David, thankyou:heart:
Tazzops, thankyou flowerforyou
Tommy, thankyou master tongue2 flowerforyou
Dhi :D =P, thankyou flowerforyou
Pkh, thankyou flowerforyou
Sanjeev, thankyou flowerforyou
Leigh, thankyou
:heart: flowerforyou

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Tue 06/18/13 12:15 AM
ur welcome and lu between friends