Topic: More Bad Free Form Writing by Terri
teadipper's photo
Sat 06/22/13 06:25 PM
There has to be someone in-between
Who'd be happy with moans
and groans but not
an absolute scream.

That even though I
could squash bugs
with the toes of my
shoes, would do it
for me and let me
say “Ew”

Someone who I opens doors
But isn't a wuss-y

Someone who kisses boo boos
And still stands up to pee

Who'd always check
my oil and
tire pressure
and top off my
gas tank and
wipe down the windows
for good measure.

Someone who'd be
grateful to eat
my kitchen
experiments
but didn't expect
me to pay his
half of the rent.

Someone whose
sexy in
a jeans and t-shirt

And who would
call me “baby”
and make sure
I never got hurt.

Journeyman236's photo
Sat 06/22/13 07:07 PM
That wasn't baddrinker

tommyboy1101's photo
Sun 06/23/13 10:30 AM
teadipper,

I agree with journeyman236, not bad. In fact, I enjoy the fact that you know how and where to break lines and drop down - in your work. Well done, tea. Good, healthy job!

Be well, Princess. Stay free and strong. smokin I am here,

tommy boy

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P4eIbwUgHJE

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teadipper's photo
Sun 06/23/13 10:36 AM

teadipper,

I agree with journeyman236, not bad. In fact, I enjoy the fact that you know how and where to break lines and drop down - in your work. Well done, tea. Good, healthy job!

Be well, Princess. Stay free and strong. smokin I am here,

tommy boy

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P4eIbwUgHJE

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Awesome. Love a guy who can read to me curled up on the couch under a blanket.

goldenhinde's photo
Sun 06/23/13 10:41 AM
Tea, well done
I often wonder why the search criteria does not have qualities like that listed.

"Good at fixing things"
"Likes leftovers even better the second time around"
"Only cares about waxing the car, like ladies natural"
I could go on and on

goldenhinde's photo
Sun 06/23/13 10:43 AM
"Doesn't think farting is a mating call"