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Topic: Do you like Braunschweiger?
goldenhinde Joined Wed 12/12/12 Posts: 631	Fri 08/30/13 12:03 PM
Do you like Braunschweiger? It's OK if you don't, I could live without it Do you like knockwurst and sauerkraut? It's OK if you don't, I could sneak it Do you like peach pie? Please God, let him like peach pie... Any kind of pie, I would suffer to live without But I could do it, I guess.. Do you like me? I hope you do, I totally could not live without you

GYs41 Joined Thu 09/05/13 Posts: 149	Sat 09/07/13 04:41 AM
Loving braunschweiger as I do, this caught my eye, and I am so glad it did. What a great poetic statement to equate out-of-the-ordinary foods with affection. Also, your poem "Within" had super imagery that struck me as all good poetry does with the thought "I wish I had written that!" G.

goldenhinde Joined Wed 12/12/12 Posts: 631	Sat 09/07/13 08:14 AM
Thanks G, I think you are the only one who "got" this.

manOfewwords Joined Wed 10/22/08 Posts: 29908	Sat 09/07/13 08:25 AM
I guess I just don't like german food, but I do like peach pie, this poem and you

goldenhinde Joined Wed 12/12/12 Posts: 631	Sat 09/07/13 09:42 PM
Hello MOFW, I like you too. This is about being with a man who doesn't like eggs or cheese, 2 of my favorite things. So I was thinking, since I would give up eggs and cheese to be with him, what else would I give up. In a nut-case shell. :-)

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