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unci · 2013-09-19T05:08:13-07:00

mindless she soars, dives with talons grasps her bounty from murky waters

Topic: osprey
unci Joined Tue 09/10/13 Posts: 11	Thu 09/19/13 05:08 AM
mindless she soars, dives with talons grasps her bounty from murky waters

GYs41 Joined Thu 09/05/13 Posts: 149	Thu 09/19/13 05:28 AM
Unci, Nice! I look forward to chatting about this, e.g., Why "murky" and not "crystal"? I'm sure you have a reason. You have a way with the haiku! G.

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Thu 09/19/13 05:31 AM
Love this Haiku Unci! Well done and perfect just the way it is! Unci!

GYs41 Joined Thu 09/05/13 Posts: 149	Thu 09/19/13 05:37 AM
I was not being critical, merely curious. I guess the concept of "le mot juste" makes me that way. Again, well done Unci. G.

unci Joined Tue 09/10/13 Posts: 11	Fri 09/20/13 06:19 AM
Thanks Leigh and G! I thought of this one while I was doing my morning run and saw the osprey diving for fish,

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Fri 09/20/13 06:59 AM
Very nice