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A Blurb
Give me a simple poem a poem for the common man not too complicated one I'll know he'll understand a poem can be good without thee or thou just a simple verse without the dramatic pow to the point, just short and sweet not three pages long composed on a cell, perhaps just a tweet so here it is, here's my stinker a simple poem surely, not for a heavy thinker rate it a two or maybe just a one it's only a blurb written just for fun |
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Excellent!
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Edited by
littlelambkin
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Fri 09/20/13 02:37 PM
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Thanks sugar
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Great write
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tanks, ya you bet'cha
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its a 10,,,,loved it,,,ya have a lot of talent young lady...
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Gosh, he,he your embarrassing me
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thank you sparks |
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What positive and inspiring comments. I too agree!
Imagine what lies ahead for you. Please keep the ink (or the keystrokes) flowing. |
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Well written, little. Say's it all. Very true, poems do not need to be lengthy and with ' thee' and 'thou' - that's for sure.
Anyway, this piece says and Does it all. Nice! 
tomo 
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Thank you "G"
Thank you Tommy I respect both of you and your poetic authority and appreciate the very generous positive feedback. You guys are great!  
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