Topic: Young Love
shortizpapi's photo
Sat 09/01/07 01:46 PM
I wanna be the smile you put on your face .

I wanna be your hands when you say your grace .

I wanna be whatever is your favorite place .

I Just wanna be close .

I wanna be the hat you put on your head .

I wanna be the sheets you put on your bed .

I wanna be the skirt wrapped around your legs .

I Just wanna be close .

I wanna be your sun, your stars, and your moon .

I wanna be your hot summer day in June .

I wanna be the smell of your sweet perfume .

I Just wanna be close .

I wanna be the seed That bare your life brand new .

I wanna be the one that's so faithful and true .

I wanna be the man down that aisle in that suit .

I Just wanna be close .


to Jayda
i love you forever
-Rocky:heart:


ArtGurl's photo
Sat 09/01/07 01:48 PM
awwww beautiful flowerforyou

joshyfox's photo
Sat 09/01/07 01:51 PM
Beautiful yes, but suiting of the poetry section of the forums rather than here I'm afraid.

pkh's photo
Sat 09/01/07 02:09 PM
Beautifulflowerforyou

frankfk's photo
Sat 09/01/07 02:31 PM
we r humans, we do mistakes, don't vote this for deletion.

very well said gentlemanflowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

shortizpapi's photo
Sat 09/01/07 02:35 PM
thank you all

felisha_21's photo
Sat 09/01/07 02:35 PM
awww.

felisha_21's photo
Sat 09/01/07 02:35 PM
awww.

leslie89's photo
Sat 09/01/07 02:37 PM
so adorablee

ayesha18's photo
Sat 09/01/07 02:38 PM
awww

theshotgunrule's photo
Sat 09/01/07 02:44 PM
This would be classified as a "Poem."

shortizpapi's photo
Sat 09/01/07 03:09 PM
itt doesntt matter
ppl post poems in this forum part all the timee
if were not suposed to,
why doesntt everyoness get deletdd

passionart's photo
Sat 09/01/07 08:05 PM
Nice poem little brother, but that is where it should be... Looks like you got lucky. Wish you the best.