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i've made walls to hold everything,in
glass,wood,8X10s contain nothing,escapes i've made walls to hold everything,in my veins,rain pain nothing,escapes my heart begs to turn the volume,down nothing,escapes i've made walls to hold everything,in nothing escapes |
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Edited by
tommyboy1101
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Thu 11/07/13 03:14 PM
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I like most especially how your lines softly bleed into one another, rolling down and continuing on, carrying on, line by line. And the content? As always, most particularly crisp and deep. Meaningful word play. I feel you, teasing. You're so sweet and pure. Good stuff, pal!
tommy boy, Ireland === |
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Tommy.....I appreciate your words,truly.
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Escape from ones self
I dont ask for help cuz when u die you die whit yourself escape from jail but still feel in cell Im i dead cuz lifes hell only time well tell Hope i escape from onez mind And think whit heart |
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