Topic: My heart
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Mon 09/03/07 07:24 PM
It's been so long since I trusted anyone
do I want to take the chance;
To let you once again see me for who I am
no rhythm, no rhyme, no dance?

Can I trust you with my heart
will it be safe in your care;
Or will you crush it and abuse it
simply pretending it's not there?

Sometimes it seems it is easier
to keep my inner self locked away;
Just to do the things that life demands
fulfilling duties every day.

Inside each of us is a dream
to reach for that unattainable star;
Yet as we mature, life takes new turns
and we accept things as they are.

Yet one thing is for certain
always know this is true;
If you ever need to know someone cares
I will always be here for you

rebel_woman07's photo
Mon 09/03/07 07:33 PM
the only person u can put trust into not breaking ur heart is ur children girl but i loved the poem

Differentkindofwench's photo
Mon 09/03/07 07:45 PM
As usual, I'm backasswards - I think the only way you can not get your heart broken is to Not have any expectations - is that even possible? There's a reason for that cliche, "you only hurt the ones you love" -- well, duh, who else would allow it and then forgive???? Now that I'm done rambling ------ I too liked your poem.

crossen's photo
Mon 09/03/07 08:06 PM
thats sweeti like it

Marly_1951's photo
Mon 09/03/07 08:39 PM
Thank You Sweety good job i liked it!!!!:smile:

DebbieJo's photo
Tue 09/04/07 02:46 AM
Very nice Jamie...flowerforyou