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Lonely are these hours
With no warm embrace Forgotten is the love That swept the hair from my face Lonely is thy heart In puddled tears it sits Forgotten is the cheek Where no one saw a kiss Yet strong willed ambition Guides this fairess still Through a world against the odds That love is really real -Krystle McGee |
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it's so good.I could see that your writings were beautiful when I saw your pic
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Edited by
rarerose
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Mon 12/30/13 07:20 AM
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Thank you dear
 , a picture may be worth a thousand words but I'd rather write them.
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Very creative I Love your work.. You just inspired me to run a rewrite of your poem.. hope u like what I did with it? I'd like us to be friends. Hours count without embrace lonely Love sits and ponders Dogs walk without ambition Like a Man who lived without reason Rivers flow towards gravity He sits and ponders dreaming to no where painting rainbows and stars Till Love calls him to eternity. Wsp 2013 |
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Lonely are these hours With no warm embrace Forgotten is the love That swept the hair from my face Lonely is thy heart In puddled tears it sits Forgotten is the cheek Where no one saw a kiss Yet strong willed ambition Guides this fairess still Through a world against the odds That love is really real -Krystle McGee   
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Very creative I Love your work.. You just inspired me to run a rewrite of your poem.. hope u like what I did with it? I'd like us to be friends. Hours count without embrace lonely Love sits and ponders Dogs walk without ambition Like a Man who lived without reason Rivers flow towards gravity He sits and ponders dreaming to no where painting rainbows and stars Till Love calls him to eternity. Wsp 2013 Thanks, I'm touched that my work has inspired you, there are many great writers I have met on here years ago that did just that for me as well. Great Job. ((Oldhippie)) Thank you too |
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