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Topic: Midnight hummingbird
Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Sun 06/08/14 10:57 PM Edited by Up2Us on Sun 06/08/14 11:32 PM
Midnight hummingbird Abused relentlessly by raindrops. Lightning reveals her beautiful, blue, purple, green, and scarlet. Silk rain soaked flowers plead her case in anguish. Still, Mother Nature turns a cold scornful deaf ear. Her crucified silhouette, framed by a piercing midnight sky. Wings fluttering across callus winds tonight. Poor small tender...Blind midnight hummingbird. .

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Tue 06/10/14 04:34 AM
this is tender-sweet

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Tue 06/10/14 06:47 AM
this is tender-sweet Thank you teasingbrunette.... The whole concept is based on a confused..... BLIND hummingbird caught in a rain storm, while attempting to feed at night. She doesn't have a perception of day or night.

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Sat 06/14/14 07:05 AM
that's why it's such a sweet write

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Sat 06/14/14 07:28 AM
Capture nature and share your thoughts!...I love this one Up2....

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Sat 06/14/14 09:51 AM
that's why it's such a sweet write Sorry teasingbrunette, I should have placed my critique of the poem in a separate post. Thanks again...

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Sat 06/14/14 09:52 AM
Thanks Leigh2154....

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Sat 06/14/14 11:30 AM
no sorry I saw it as an explanation

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