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Edited by
Up2Us
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Sun 07/13/14 11:10 AM
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Opaque Tears Crying opaque tears, she waits by the door. A malice filled heart rages with internal anarchy. Reflections of unrecognizable emotions, ripple upon a glass table top. He soon walks into the dilapidated front door. The cold gun has painted a cognitive mural. Pulling the trigger insidiously......BANG. 
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Edited by
Up2Us
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Tue 07/15/14 07:58 PM
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Adding the following ending.
Pulling the trigger insidiously......BANG Lithely sinking to the ground, asking why. Through opaque tears she whispers, because I loved you.
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Edited by
Up2Us
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Wed 07/16/14 01:50 AM
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Sometimes the following is true:
"Heaven has no rage like love to hatred turned. Nor hell a fury like a woman scorned". 
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Edited by
teasingbrunette
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Wed 07/16/14 06:19 AM
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many images and layers in this piece...like your additions...
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Thank you teasingbrunette....
This write is like watching a twisted video for me.
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twists and turns
exploring,creating |
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Edited by
Up2Us
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Wed 07/16/14 12:29 PM
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twists and turns exploring,creating Interesting..... Now that sounds like us on the ~ hottest day 
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Wow!!!!..I loved it..every bit of it..
  
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Wow!!!!..I loved it..every bit of it..
Thanks 2KidsMom....
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