Topic: Broken Dreams
thevocalist's photo
Wed 09/26/07 07:16 AM
Sifting thru the pieces
of all the broken dreams
The future was almost everything
it was planned it to be

When drastic changes stop your world
and pieces start to fall
their isn't much that one can do
to get thru it all

As time goes by you look
some pieces are around
Do we gather, do we rebuid,
or leave them where they're found?

Maybe plan a new dream
With goals that can be reached
in such a way I will succeed
my goals cannot be breached

This is how I used to think
it's harder then it seems
to try and build a new plan
upon the broken dreams



countrysoul64's photo
Wed 09/26/07 07:21 AM
I really like this!

Jess642's photo
Wed 09/26/07 07:26 AM
Shattered pieces dressed in hope
Cloaked in the maybes
Of yesterdays and wishes on the wind.

Stand a little taller on this mound
Closer to the clouds
Higher on the hill of today.

Pick and choose the pieces of
these past dreams,
Shine them with the breath of hope.

Not broken, merely down upon the ground
fertilised in wisdom,
Dreaming of tomorrows truths.


flowerforyou




blonderockermom's photo
Wed 09/26/07 07:32 AM
Enjoyed reading both poems....thanks:smile: flowerforyou

thevocalist's photo
Wed 09/26/07 07:42 AM
Yes that was very nice. optimism runs high in your life.

coco56's photo
Wed 09/26/07 07:44 AM
vocalist sent u an email happy

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Wed 09/26/07 08:23 AM
The best songs and poems were written from heartache...
flowerforyou
Love will find you again, when you aren't looking...
:tongue:

thevocalist's photo
Wed 09/26/07 08:34 AM
I agree on the best songs part. It seems the emotional highs and lows gets me writing quickly. I feel lucky I have that release.

pinkylee43's photo
Wed 09/26/07 08:51 AM
I love reading other peoples poems they inspire me to write more of my poems. And you really have way with words and your poems were informative inspiring and lovely to read and i enjoy reading them

LAMom's photo
Wed 09/26/07 08:54 AM
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

thevocalist's photo
Wed 09/26/07 09:41 AM
Thanks Pinky, I usually just write songs, that was a rare moment for me.

pkh's photo
Wed 09/26/07 10:02 AM
very niceflowerforyou

thevocalist's photo
Wed 09/26/07 10:12 AM
Thank you. I try to write more up beat, it just doesn't work like that.:tongue: