Topic: 5-7-5 game
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Thu 09/27/07 07:15 PM
I first seen this game on another site and it turned out to be a lot of fun so I thought I might try it here and see how it does. The object is to write a Haiku, the trick is your first line must be the same as the previous last line,

ex the river flows free
the sun brings new life to all
I love the cool breeze

I love the cool breeze
I love the tall strong oak tree
life is beautiful.

and that is how it is done, do you want to play?

peace to all crearure
let love spread to all the world
let harmony live

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Thu 09/27/07 09:11 PM
I'll give it a try..not very good with Haiku tho

Let harmony live
The heart beat of Mother Earth
Pulses through each of us

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Thu 09/27/07 09:21 PM
Pulses through each of us
Like the sands of time
The ebb and flow of war and peace

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Thu 09/27/07 09:26 PM
The ebb and flow of war and peace
Sad are the days past
A glimpse of the future!

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Thu 09/27/07 09:28 PM
A glimps of the future.
bringing hope.
To children everywhere.

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Fri 09/28/07 06:52 AM
remember a haiku is 5-7-5
first line has 5 sylables
second line has 7 sylables
last line has 5 sylables.

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Fri 09/28/07 06:55 AM
the sun brings new life
the rain refreshes the earth
all is wonderful