Topic: I wonder
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Sat 10/18/14 01:06 AM
I wonder where you are today
whether close to me or far away
perhaps living in the very next street
so there is always just a chance to meet
but would you just not know my name
seeing as I do not look the same
as when we walked so many miles
when the world was full of smiles


Astrid's photo
Sat 10/18/14 01:44 AM
Nice:smile: :thumbsup:

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Sat 10/18/14 02:42 AM
flowerforyou flowerforyou
Good one.....very nice!

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Sat 10/18/14 01:56 PM

flowerforyou flowerforyou
Good one.....very nice!


Thanks so much, now you must write something too :)

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Sat 10/18/14 01:56 PM
Thanks , you are so kind, I hope you going to write something on here too

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Sat 10/18/14 03:06 PM
The last time I saw Colette

Such an unforgettable day
a sunny day with clouds from time to time
you come to me in the street
and knock me out of rhyme
in two years why did we not meet?

I should notice more
but I'm busy doing mime
for the first time in my life
having nothing to say
telling you a million words of lies
on starry nights alone along the way

I need to say so much
I need so much to touch
a simple holding of your hand
will help to make you understand
will tell you that I will not forget
if I live a hundred years

your face will haunt me still and yet
i am tough too tough to care
you're just a girl with dreams of endless love
as if such things came down from up above
yet was it not I who gave you such ideas
while lying under stars above

before i drifted off to look for someone new
and found too late that there was none like you
today I could not speak
so I told you not a single lie
and I never saw you cry
and we never said goodbye
you will not know that you were never just my friend
and that love does not come to an end



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Sat 10/18/14 08:22 PM


flowerforyou flowerforyou
Good one.....very nice!


Thanks so much, now you must write something too :)


Oh dear.....now I will never give a complement again!
I am not good at poems or poetry...can I quote?




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Sun 10/19/14 01:34 AM



flowerforyou flowerforyou
Good one.....very nice!


Thanks so much, now you must write something too :)


Oh dear.....now I will never give a complement again!
I am not good at poems or poetry...can I quote?

Thanks for your kind compliment, please quote if you wish
:)




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Sun 10/19/14 04:47 AM
Thanks, Walker...that was my very first attempt!

And my mom will always be in my thoughts, though I don't get to see her as often as I like, being in another state. I was inspired to write something as I thought of her today after seeing my sis post her pic on FB!

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Sun 10/19/14 05:52 AM

Thanks, Walker...that was my very first attempt!

And my mom will always be in my thoughts, though I don't get to see her as often as I like, being in another state. I was inspired to write something as I thought of her today after seeing my sis post her pic on FB!



Wow, it's a great first attempt! and so you now must on to write many many more, as you say, inspiration is the key, and you have that, so keep on writing!
james

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Sun 10/19/14 07:12 AM


Thanks, Walker...that was my very first attempt!

And my mom will always be in my thoughts, though I don't get to see her as often as I like, being in another state. I was inspired to write something as I thought of her today after seeing my sis post her pic on FB!



Wow, it's a great first attempt! and so you now must on to write many many more, as you say, inspiration is the key, and you have that, so keep on writing!
james


Thanks...I will try though but compared yours and Angels...it is nothing!

And Rainbowslider's rhymes so well......!

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Sun 10/19/14 05:48 PM


Thanks...I will try though but compared yours and Angels...it is nothing!

And Rainbowslider's rhymes so well......!




Had to rephrase it...

Compared to yours and Angel's....mine is nothing!!!