Topic: Too Close
shadow_princess's photo
Sat 10/13/07 10:01 AM
This heart bleeds
Emotion running ramped
My thoughts swirl
With a million could-have-beens
And still nothing was
Or at least nothing the way
I feared, back home safe and sound
Your voice filled my ears
A wave of relief swept
Through my soul
Drinking in every syllable
As if it may be the last
heart racing
Palms sweaty
I long for your arms around me
To hear your breath calm and steady
My eyes see you here
But this brain still sees you there
No longer do I take our days together for granted
Within seconds it could have been gone
Tears stream down my face
As reality sets in
It was just too close

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Sat 10/13/07 10:06 AM
Excellent piece lil sis, the emotions evoked are very real:cry: flowerforyou

Fade2Black's photo
Sat 10/13/07 10:07 AM
VERY nice. glasses

shadow_princess's photo
Sat 10/13/07 10:11 AM
trust me sis i know...thats what i kept feelin last night still am

John1992's photo
Sat 10/13/07 10:29 AM
No Worries Nicki He's home

pkh's photo
Sat 10/13/07 10:51 AM
flowerforyou awesome piece