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      This heart bleeds 
 Emotion running ramped My thoughts swirl With a million could-have-beens And still nothing was Or at least nothing the way I feared, back home safe and sound Your voice filled my ears A wave of relief swept Through my soul Drinking in every syllable As if it may be the last heart racing Palms sweaty I long for your arms around me To hear your breath calm and steady My eyes see you here But this brain still sees you there No longer do I take our days together for granted Within seconds it could have been gone Tears stream down my face As reality sets in It was just too close | |
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      Excellent piece lil sis, the emotions evoked are very real     | |
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      VERY nice.     | |
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      trust me sis i know...thats what i kept feelin last night still am
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      No Worries Nicki He's home
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|  awesome piece | |
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