Topic: Each Step You Take
mig25's photo
Thu 08/27/15 04:54 PM
Edited by mig25 on Thu 08/27/15 04:55 PM
Each Step You Take


Thoughts running
in and out of my soul
as I watch you
walk away

"��Don't go"
stand at the edge of my throat
but never fall from my lips
and I am
alone again

I can feel
each step you take
it's as if
you'��re walking through me
running
to escape
to leave

My knees
grow weaker
my body cold
as I watch love hurt
as I watch life abandon me
I am
alone again

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Sun 08/30/15 09:23 PM
Good job :)

SitkaRains's photo
Sun 08/30/15 09:32 PM
Great poem..

tommyboy1101's photo
Sun 08/30/15 09:34 PM
Good construction. Easy flow. Readable. Nice!