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Topic: tomb thoughts I
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Mon 10/22/07 11:54 PM
nightmares invade the tombs at night
nights forever when theres no light
taking away every part of me
ceasing to feel reality

the bullet is close the end is near
can i pull the trigger,my only fear
deep in the dark is where i dwell
discomfort in my own living hell

drops of blood cover the floor
ive bled the past, cant bleed no more
the tears i never learned to shed
are the tears you can cry when i am dead

deep and dark eternally lost
never prepared to...pay the cost
love is the most sinister of all
it leaves you lonely after the fall

no one around me,so no one to see
what losing love has done to me
ive spent three years licking my wounds
alone in my deepest darkest tombs...



writings from the tombs...









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Mon 10/22/07 11:58 PM
death is rarely poetic.

there are other ways to express oneself.

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Mon 10/22/07 11:58 PM
God thats morbid isn't it?

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Tue 10/23/07 12:03 AM
Love is painful and losing love i have no words to fully describe the lose,,, Cry your tears, for I do see you,,,

Hugs flowerforyou :cry:

sad, brilliant and so heartfelt

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Tue 10/23/07 12:03 AM
Well, the grammar leaves something to be desired, but the meter is flawless..

I give it a 9!!!

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Tue 10/23/07 12:20 AM
iandirac: does the name edgar allen poe ring any bells im sure if he were alive he might have differed with your opinion..just a thought

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Tue 10/23/07 12:22 AM
it is morbid but i love it.....i think it sounds great. sounds kind of like some of the things i write actually. but i think it is really beautiful. don't let anyone knock you down because being able to write like that is a beautful, amazing artform that not many will ever have. let it come to you as it does.



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Tue 10/23/07 12:25 AM
well thank you danni i feel sometimes you have to write them down to get them off of you

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Tue 10/23/07 12:27 AM
yes you do.....been there many times. your welcome

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Tue 10/23/07 12:28 AM
per haps you would be interested in my other ones i would like to see what you think of them also

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Tue 10/23/07 12:30 AM
TomRaider

There is a reason for my name as I assume there is one for yours.

Perhaps the obvious nature of this has escaped you.

And yes, I am arrogant.

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Tue 10/23/07 12:31 AM
and your point is...

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Tue 10/23/07 12:34 AM
actually i couldnt come up with a name that would express how much of an arrogant ass i am so i just settled for what i was watching on t.v lol

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Tue 10/23/07 12:34 AM
I don't require one

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Tue 10/23/07 12:34 AM
yeah i would love to see some of them.

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Tue 10/23/07 12:36 AM
no iandirac you dont have one

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Tue 10/23/07 12:38 AM
you haven't figured it out, have you?

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Tue 10/23/07 12:38 AM
danni go to all post into poems ,jokes and quotes and look up my name there are several there i would appreciate your thoughts on these thx

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Tue 10/23/07 12:40 AM
iandirac theres no point it benefits me none

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Tue 10/23/07 12:41 AM
correct

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