Topic: Insomnia
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Tue 04/19/16 12:59 PM

I lay me down

Another endless night

Gazing upwards

Staring

The ceiling is my confidant

My old friend

Always there when I need to talk

Silent, yet the profound words ring in my ear

The darkness, my comfort, surrounding me, huging me softly

Helping me hide the dreams I hold


Our debate goes on night after night

'What should I say'

'What should I do'

'What will the reaction be'

'I can't say that'

'You must be joking'

'No, that will sound stupid'

Talking to myself, and answering, my friend the ceiling having an occasional say


Oh why can't I sleep

The day's I'm so tired

I can't concentrate

Thoughts driving me out of my mind

This is crazy

This is madness

This is insomnia

Wise old darkness interupts and whispers, 'this is love'

SitkaRains's photo
Tue 04/19/16 05:33 PM
:thumbsup:

Good Job
Joe

technovative's photo
Tue 04/19/16 05:40 PM
Nice Joe, very relatable.

Beachfarmer's photo
Tue 04/19/16 06:25 PM
Yes relatable (thanks tech).......I know "this" type of sleeplessness!

Bravo Joe!

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Tue 04/19/16 07:46 PM
Very Good!!

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Wed 04/20/16 05:08 AM
I love this.flowers flowers


Wonder.... who is the lucky lady that cause the insomnia.:smile: :smile:

tommyboy1101's photo
Tue 05/10/16 05:09 AM
Very nice Joe.