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Topic: Fall
matrueyear Joined Thu 03/30/17 Posts: 187	Sun 04/23/17 07:22 AM
The snow is dancing outside of window, I lay in bed wishing to cuddle. It's been three years in a row , My heart is being alone. Feeling my velvet skin, Listening the snow fly. Thinking the relationship between quality and quantity. Quantify snow represents winter, Cold, white and quiet. Just like the single life, All of the time . When snow search the ground to fall, Where should my heart to fall?

joethebricky Joined Sat 08/04/12 Posts: 12740	Sun 04/23/17 10:48 AM
Very nice

matrueyear Joined Thu 03/30/17 Posts: 187	Sun 04/23/17 03:43 PM
Very nice Thank you, Joe!

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2627	Sun 04/23/17 05:48 PM
Great use of imagery, matrueyear. Thanks for sharing.

matrueyear Joined Thu 03/30/17 Posts: 187	Sun 04/23/17 08:26 PM
Great use of imagery, matrueyear. Thanks for sharing. Thank you, tech.... I have enjoyed reading your creations very much!

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