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Topic: Snag Her with Swagger
technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2627	Fri 04/28/17 09:17 PM Edited by technovative on Fri 04/28/17 09:18 PM
Chest puffed, sparkling linked cuffs. Brim tipped askew, atop well coiffed hairdo. Commanding style, crooked… practiced smile. Knees gapped wide, drivers seat steep inclined. Glides when he creeps, sly when he speaks. Charm that allures, but is his heart pure?

BamaLuv68 Joined Wed 04/19/17 Posts: 5	Fri 04/28/17 11:35 PM
Ahhh, true talent! And the man seems legit

joethebricky Joined Sat 08/04/12 Posts: 12740	Sat 04/29/17 12:04 AM
Excellent as usual Tech, reminded me of one or two people I've known.

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2627	Sat 04/29/17 12:32 AM
Ahhh, true talent! And the man seems legit Why thank you kindly, Bama.

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2627	Sat 04/29/17 12:43 AM
Excellent as usual Tech, reminded me of one or two people I've known. Yep, lots of folks run the old bait and switch routine, unfortunately. Thanks mate.

Beachfarmer Joined Tue 04/17/07 Posts: 24649	Sat 04/29/17 04:41 AM
Swerve and Creep

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2627	Sat 04/29/17 05:24 PM
Swerve and Creep Just don't leave a trail of rubber on the road that can be followed. Thanks for taking a gander and commenting, Beach.

mzrosie Joined Wed 08/14/13 Posts: 33997	Sun 04/30/17 04:20 PM
Fun to read.. cool poem, techno

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2627	Sun 04/30/17 05:29 PM
Fun to read.. cool poem, techno Thanks Rosie. I'm glad it was a fun read.

dolphin0925 Joined Tue 08/18/15 Posts: 1900	Sun 04/30/17 09:04 PM Edited by dolphin0925 on Sun 04/30/17 09:15 PM
Chest puffed, sparkling linked cuffs. Brim tipped askew, atop well coiffed hairdo. Commanding style, crooked… practiced smile. Knees gapped wide, drivers seat steep inclined. Glides when he creeps, sly when he speaks. Charm that allures, but is his heart pure? A cool picture of a real swagger an alluring charm Moves like jagger Looks that could disarm A sly as a fox Could he open a Pandora's box Danger! Danger! Girls beware.... Cool poem Techno

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2627	Mon 05/01/17 01:11 AM
Yes very cool poem techno .. good luck with the swagger and snagging Nah... swaggn'-n-snagn' ain't my style. Thanks for taking a squiz and sharing your thoughts, kiwi girl.

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2627	Mon 05/01/17 01:14 AM
Chest puffed, sparkling linked cuffs. Brim tipped askew, atop well coiffed hairdo. Commanding style, crooked… practiced smile. Knees gapped wide, drivers seat steep inclined. Glides when he creeps, sly when he speaks. Charm that allures, but is his heart pure? A cool picture of a real swagger an alluring charm Moves like jagger Looks that could disarm A sly as a fox Could he open a Pandora's box Danger! Danger! Girls beware.... Cool poem Techno Tis a cautionary tale indeed. I appreciate you giving it a look and commenting, dolphin.

lu_rosemary Joined Wed 09/11/13 Posts: 9123	Mon 05/01/17 01:17 AM
Beautiful poem, innovative as always.

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2627	Mon 05/01/17 01:25 AM
Beautiful poem, innovative as always. Thank you my friend. It's pleasing to get feedback from a talented writer.

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2627	Mon 05/01/17 03:18 AM
Yes very cool poem techno .. good luck with the swagger and snagging Nah... swaggn'-n-snagn' ain't my style. Thanks for taking a squiz and sharing your thoughts, kiwi girl. something in the way he moves .. attracts me like no other other lover .. a famous song !!! Swagger is not always bad :-) I'm not saying swagger is bad, it's just not me. :) "Something" it's been covered by a lot of artists. A good indication that it resonates with many.