Been on for a month but no luck! Please rate me and be honest. Thanks!

Hi Jeremy, Well, to be honest, I would get rid of the picture with you laying in the bed, major turn off for women.

If you're looking to just hook up with someone, to hang out and party with, then what you wrote is fine, IMO. But if not, then add a little more about the things you enjoy. You say you enjoy many things, say what some of them are other than hanging out in a bar listening to music. That doesn't come across well. Maybe add a few more interests as well.

It would help to say what it is that you are looking for in a relationship. Although your profile says you are separated, which means you're still married, so that could be a reason for not getting results.

Wish I could be more helpful. Good luck and welcome to Mingle2!

Thanks for the pointers. I will definitely consider them?