Topic: Goodbye
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Mon 09/24/18 01:35 PM
I am staring at blank paper,
And the pen in my hand,
Been hours but no lines form,
What went wrong?
I don't understand..

You were my inspiration,
My crush,
My spark,
You brought a light,
In my life which so far,
Was dull and dark..

I wrote becoz of you,
All my poems were about you,
And yet now I am struggling,
To come up with,
Something new..

Maybe your memories are fading,
And my spark is fading with you,
Maybe I won't be able to write now,
So I should take my cue..

Just want to say thank you,
For the light and excitement,
You brought in my life,
Made me feel high,
But its time now,
To let go of your memories,
And to say goodbye..





wavernsix20six's photo
Mon 09/24/18 02:49 PM
hope u r going 2 be ok ?

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Mon 09/24/18 03:13 PM
Edited by Jasmine on Mon 09/24/18 03:15 PM

hope u r going 2 be ok ?


Yes, I will be ok. Thanks smile2

Palghat's photo
Tue 09/25/18 01:37 PM
Wow!!

Neelam, hope the guy will be okay

you know Boys
Half the time we are searching for love; it is right besides us and we don't know it; because we are chasing someone far away.

And then when the person besides us leaves
We fall, into obsession and think it as love.

You don't have to reply.
Best wishes

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Tue 09/25/18 03:53 PM

Wow!!

Neelam, hope the guy will be okay

you know Boys
Half the time we are searching for love; it is right besides us and we don't know it; because we are chasing someone far away.

And then when the person besides us leaves
We fall, into obsession and think it as love.

You don't have to reply.
Best wishes



Thank you for the insight smile2

tessa68's photo
Mon 10/01/18 08:04 PM
I can relate from that poem,thank you for sharing it.

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Mon 10/01/18 09:59 PM

I can relate from that poem,thank you for sharing it.


Thank you and glad you liked smile2

tessa68's photo
Tue 10/02/18 07:12 AM


I can relate from that poem,thank you for sharing it.


Thank you and glad you liked smile2
I loved it, as it reminds me of my fiance who just passed away last 2 mos. ago,I miss him here on the forum.

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Tue 10/02/18 01:50 PM



I can relate from that poem,thank you for sharing it.


Thank you and glad you liked smile2
I loved it, as it reminds me of my fiance who just passed away last 2 mos. ago,I miss him here on the forum.


Sorry to hear about your loss. Hope you find some solace on the forums.

Williams1981's photo
Fri 10/05/18 11:30 PM
Close one door to open a new one.. you will always have your spark .. u just got distracted .. keep love in your heart n fire in your eyes..

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Sat 10/06/18 03:47 AM

Close one door to open a new one.. you will always have your spark .. u just got distracted .. keep love in your heart n fire in your eyes..

Thank you for your beautiful and encouraging words smile2

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Sat 10/06/18 04:29 AM
Hugs Little girl :cry:

Life is harsh.




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Sat 10/06/18 05:35 AM

Hugs Little girl :cry:

Life is harsh.






Thank you. Life is harsh..it can be beautiful too smile2

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Mon 10/22/18 01:14 AM

I am staring at blank paper,
And the pen in my hand,
Been hours but no lines form,
What went wrong?
I don't understand..

You were my inspiration,
My crush,
My spark,
You brought a light,
In my life which so far,
Was dull and dark..

I wrote becoz of you,
All my poems were about you,
And yet now I am struggling,
To come up with,
Something new..

Maybe your memories are fading,
And my spark is fading with you,
Maybe I won't be able to write now,
So I should take my cue..

Just want to say thank you,
For the light and excitement,
You brought in my life,
Made me feel high,
But its time now,
To let go of your memories,
And to say goodbye..






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Mon 10/22/18 01:15 AM
it is a beautiful one

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Mon 10/22/18 02:24 AM

it is a beautiful one

Thank you :slight_smile: