Topic: cynical
otterman's photo
Thu 02/28/08 11:39 AM
Slave to the gaunlet
you meddle in the mud
looking to the surface
but never really breathed
deying your own nature
although for goodness sake
walking in the web
lost in the stars
that cold depth of space
to spite the sun to warm your face
repention to soothe your soul my friend
for what hides behind the smile
everlasting the monotone pierces the ears yet unborn
yearning for a footstep
to lead them where no one will go
only a blur
chins held high and squinting
blind to the glass of the antfarm
crying coughing skies
shaking the land
to emit the blood of man
the bully of itself
for my god stands on yours
the trees laugh in approval
while animals cover their young
and i wipe away the one tear on my cheeck

MirrorMirror's photo
Thu 02/28/08 11:45 AM
smokin

countrybumpkin2u's photo
Thu 02/28/08 11:55 AM
frown frown frown frown frown frown frown frown frown frown frown frown frown frown frown frown
Ummm...
Otter?noway noway noway
Is something wrong?huh
I mean you can talk to us.smokin
Really you can.drinker
We are here for you.:heart:


otterman's photo
Thu 02/28/08 11:57 AM

frown frown frown frown frown frown frown frown frown frown frown frown frown frown frown frown
Ummm...
Otter?noway noway noway
Is something wrong?huh
I mean you can talk to us.smokin
Really you can.drinker
We are here for you.:heart:


fine thanxflowerforyou cant all be peaches ya know

countrybumpkin2u's photo
Thu 02/28/08 12:01 PM
Edited by countrybumpkin2u on Thu 02/28/08 12:03 PM


frown frown frown frown frown frown frown frown frown frown frown frown frown frown frown frown
Ummm...
Otter?noway noway noway
Is something wrong?huh
I mean you can talk to us.smokin
Really you can.drinker
We are here for you.:heart:


fine thanxflowerforyou cant all be peaches ya know



I completely understand!flowerforyou I wrote Something today ...well lets just say .... I WENT OF THE HOOKdevil ..... for me that is.blushing

otterman's photo
Thu 02/28/08 12:03 PM
i'm lookin

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Thu 02/28/08 01:28 PM
smokin interesting...