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Edited by
timmyschillin
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Sun 03/02/08 12:00 PM
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way before my hurst
before my birth I figured the worst heavy letters and sleezy b's screamin into me loppin photos on a peg pathways, grass ways, plottin pictures on my leg smokin weed with all the will to please I lay wealth as knives lay bree long ago when I had mounds of purple dro a certain glow With the matching flow I remembered Matt, the "dub sack" spun it back, tipped the hat back for my old school cat long gone, old like pong, like dirt on your fingers reminiscent dusk and pulls on buddy "binger" play the hear say, come on up another day I'm thinner like water, blood is better, I'm a sinner I remember when I wrote songs for baby Brenner without a doubt I'm growing from a sprout you left me here screaming "please let me out" a mentor of mind sores, you kept me from the floor remember me, remember the trees, remember you and yours |
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Edited by
Noden
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Sun 03/02/08 11:54 AM
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Man this was a first for me, mostly cus I don't listen to rap,...but when gettin to the second line, "before my birth I figured the worst", it grab my attention, made me wanna read more, I'd have to tell ya man, has a good beat, the wording, feelin the scene, and not just a rhyming thang...loved to hear it loud,
trying it out in a poetry place, like gotpoetry.com, you'll like it....can even do vid or taping of your writes.... huhuh, I am surprised....me likes |
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Edited by
timmyschillin
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Sun 03/02/08 11:55 AM
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Thanks man. I was just thinking about my friend that left me for rehab a long time ago and I haven't seen him since. Maybe that puts it into perspective for u.
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