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Topic: Free
rarerose Joined Sun 02/18/07 Posts: 587	Mon 03/03/08 08:42 PM Edited by rarerose on Mon 03/03/08 08:43 PM
Tangled, entrapped waiting for our time to be free hoping to fly with the wind and show all our colors dreaming our dreams in the clouds above the stormy skies raining our love upon those that too want to fly Crying, lonely holding out our arms they may be frail and empty but they're filled with warmth praying for peace, hoping for joy rejoicing in the rain singing aloud for all to hear it's time to live again. Krystle McGee

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Mon 03/03/08 08:43 PM
excellent

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Mon 03/03/08 08:53 PM


blonderockermom Joined Wed 08/08/07 Posts: 6886	Mon 03/03/08 09:00 PM
Very nice..

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Mon 03/03/08 09:11 PM
very nice

sasfire75 Joined Mon 01/21/08 Posts: 3242	Mon 03/03/08 09:40 PM
That was a good write

rarerose Joined Sun 02/18/07 Posts: 587	Tue 03/04/08 06:59 AM
Thank you all

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Tue 03/04/08 07:17 AM
(((( Krystle )))))

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Tue 03/04/08 11:32 AM
Howdy howdy rare rose... Beautiful poem... (lol, nice picture too) dreaming our dreams in the clouds above the stormy skies raining our love upon those that too want to fly <--- I found these lines to be particularly to my fancy... Thanks for sharing!

rarerose Joined Sun 02/18/07 Posts: 587	Wed 03/05/08 12:03 PM
thank you anytime hugs for all to share

mteagle31 Joined Thu 06/14/07 Posts: 2155	Wed 03/05/08 12:07 PM
Rose, that was beautiful, well done, bravo.

jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 2365	Wed 03/05/08 06:57 PM

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