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baby aint the sunset like heaven
the opulence in your diamond eye soul and your angel strummed harp songs surrounded by mirrors of my movement i see i see i see oval suns i sea i sea sea your eyes i feel fire from your suns can i feed your suns my fire and now you know the blue in my sky is you baby did i ever tell you your my heaven |
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The only word I didn't like, was opulence...
Other then that, kick enough! |
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Wow- good write!
 
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very nice Jim like this in you
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Wow-very touching. Keep writing. I enjoyed it.
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