Topic: nature
jimz's photo
Mon 03/10/08 02:17 PM
in my rainbow cloud
in the sun of my being

the core of my soul
the core of my earth

my mythical wings
fly together
and now I know
when I fly
I need both wings

I would be
an empty shell
without my pain

I would be
full and deaad
without my blessings

I've learned that life
and more life
is my first blessing
and that when I'm gone
I was blessed to be here

I cross divided canyons

the earth's castles
the earth's gravves

the river of my youth
so down below
that I can only dream
the dreams into my soul

nature's castles
the steep ridges
of the canyons
where some have jumped, yes
but where some have looked down
and in

to find more beauty
to fill their vast
eternal soul

I do neither
I climb down
almost slipping
where the journey
to the bottom
would k*ll me
if I had nothing
to hold on to

she spins in space
I spin in space

her sweet gravity
seems an illlusion

and me standing
and me alive

just me

seems also
not real

I've barely touched
the hem of my soul's robe
but how far do I have to go
or maybe like water
I need to rise in the sky
and fall like rain
to nurture

but also for storms
for thunder and lightning
opens my eyes

and now I
will lay
in the meadow
of my beginning

and water
all my vines
all my flowers
yet I will never eat
from my garden
because I know
it is not really mine

and the moon
ah natures god child
lights up my darkness
yet sometimes
even god's lights
cannot shake

my blindness
my loneliness

so I rest
in a deep shadow

learning to love
learning to wait

and knowing
that at times
I cannot see in the fog
so when the fogs covers
me

I will
not look outwards
but in





nightimefantasy's photo
Mon 03/10/08 02:23 PM




bigsmile



it's very nice

FroznChild's photo
Tue 03/11/08 04:37 AM
Long JimZ... Long. Loooooooooooong.
But well worth it... beautifully written/said. I really like the two seperate pieces theme, that starts at the beginning, and carries through... but, it's so well worded... and, excellent on plays of ideas.
hmmm... Thanks. lol.

BonnyMiss's photo
Tue 03/11/08 04:41 AM
when I fly
I need both wings
The same as one hand cannot clap, nice write

Differentkindofwench's photo
Tue 03/11/08 09:07 AM
jimz this is flippin awesome!

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Thu 03/13/08 05:40 AM
flowerforyou :smile: flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Thu 03/13/08 07:19 AM
(((( Jimmy ))))

flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou