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Tue 05/24/16 12:53 PM
I had at once felt the essence to my effervescence.
Blood boils as time spent,
But time was narcoleptic.
Like the white mist as it passes through the septum,
I felt as low as the bass, with a little more treble.
Head aches from a stampede of thoughts.
A sudden revelation to the answers that I sought.
A tower of knowledge, and I was standing at the top,
But destined to lose it all once this world falls apart.

I'm zoning in and out of what appears to be a dream.
My soul is crying out,
But nobody hears the scream.
The pressure of an ocean, I'm a lonely submarine.
Even though this holy moment has me feeling so serene.

Heart beats to a frequency I am unable to read.
And every breath reflects eternity.
Conscious is surfacing...

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Sun 05/22/16 02:45 PM
Wow guys! Thank you for taking the time to read and the positive feedback is much appreciated. I'm happy to have stumbled across this forum. It's nice to have a convenient means for us to share our common interests and talents. The poetry each of you compose is impressive! I am absolutely looking forward to reading more, so keep up the good work!

Much love.

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Fri 05/20/16 10:45 AM
It was like a grain of sand transmuted to pearl.
She's was a comet, crash landed, spreading life to my world.
Structure and foundation
were an underground basement.
Crumbled castle is now a chapel,
housing statues and murals.

She excavated my skull and elevated my soul.
Her words, a novocaine to numb the ache in my bones.
She was my alchemist stone, for the chain that had broken, had not only been fixed,
But was changed into gold.

Patiently, she waits for me.
Recovering all the strength I need.
Her loveliness, a tranquil breeze.
Embraces me, a taste of peace.