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God's Gift
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Truly tender Thank you, Angel. I love reading your writing. |
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With The Coming Of The Rain
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Nice write!
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How OFTEN
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Very touching!
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With you.
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That was beautiful!
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These Two Wheels
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Nice
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God's Gift
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Thank you mteagle, d4tc, and flame1cutie.
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God's Gift
Edited by
CantonGal
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Sun 08/10/08 07:14 PM
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My daughter and son are everyday: a mirror, a reminder, a gift, a surprise, a challenge but moreso a heart within my own. That will not let me die or give up, that gives me strength that i normally would never realize and that makes me feel things i didn't know i could feel. Great write! Thank you. Your welcome! That is why God gave us the gift of children. |
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God's Gift
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Your child is but a reflection of your eye. To always be your reason to try. And to hold them when they cry. Seeing them grow is just a life-long sigh! GREAT WORK Mommy,wink..lol Thank you! |
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Very touching, God bless you!
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Great write!
Is it really worth the wait? Having enough patience to find out. Not knowing what the outcome is, I guess is what love is all about. The fear of being the only one building, A love that might be gone someday. Just going with the flow of things, Is what everyone else would say. |
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Love
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Thanks!
Robert, Pkd1220,Sparkleplenty424, and MirrorMirror |
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A woman
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Nice write
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The seed
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Beautiful
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God's Gift
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Watching you grow
To the man you will be Knowing I did a good job Is all that matters to me You are the sunlight That shines everyday Even when it is raining You still shine in every way Sharing the laughter The smile on your face The feeling in my heart No one will ever replace You always make me proud With everything you achieve My love for my son Is God's gift to me |
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Beautiful Robert
If what you want today Should happen tomorrow Welcome in the love Say goodbye to the sorrow That day will soon come When you will truly know Hold on to her real tight And never let her go |
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Is It Me??
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If these thoughts you write are true, then why whine within a rhyme? Nice one, Robert. I actually like reading your whines, I mean rhymes. LOL!!! |
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Nice to be able to share the pain you feel. So many will agree. Nice job!
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Scared
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I want to get to know you
The next step is so hard to take The thought of falling too deep Sometimes keeps me awake I think this road I'm walking on Just might be the wrong way The nervousness that I feel Will hopefully pass by someday Probably when It is too late Wondering what might have been Trying to convince myself My heart's not broken again Being hurt in the past Has made me this strong I put up this metal shield So nothing else can go wrong |
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Love
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It is hard to want something
That you never really had The feeling of being loved Just the feeling of being sad I would like to open up Let someone inside my heart It is a hard thing to do I don't know where to start Having so many walk out Keeps your self esteem low I have to love myself first For anything else to grow I have lost out many times Leaving myself out in the cold Scared to open my mind Never having anyone to hold A very fragile individual Is what I let myself become Blocking out what is in the past Is easier said than done |
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Dedicated to pregnant moms
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That was really sweet, Robert!
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