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Topic: God's Gift
CantonGal Joined Thu 07/10/08 Posts: 124	Sun 08/10/08 10:14 AM
Watching you grow To the man you will be Knowing I did a good job Is all that matters to me You are the sunlight That shines everyday Even when it is raining You still shine in every way Sharing the laughter The smile on your face The feeling in my heart No one will ever replace You always make me proud With everything you achieve My love for my son Is God's gift to me

flame1cutie Joined Thu 04/24/08 Posts: 7307	Sun 08/10/08 10:57 AM


d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Sun 08/10/08 11:44 AM
Very Nice.

bigblue29 Joined Fri 03/07/08 Posts: 709	Sun 08/10/08 01:01 PM
My daughter and son are everyday: a mirror, a reminder, a gift, a surprise, a challenge but moreso a heart within my own. That will not let me die or give up, that gives me strength that i normally would never realize and that makes me feel things i didn't know i could feel. Great write! Thank you.

mteagle31 Joined Thu 06/14/07 Posts: 2155	Sun 08/10/08 01:45 PM
Well done!

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sun 08/10/08 03:21 PM
Your child is but a reflection of your eye. To always be your reason to try. And to hold them when they cry. Seeing them grow is just a life-long sigh! GREAT WORK Mommy,wink..lol

CantonGal Joined Thu 07/10/08 Posts: 124	Sun 08/10/08 06:34 PM
Your child is but a reflection of your eye. To always be your reason to try. And to hold them when they cry. Seeing them grow is just a life-long sigh! GREAT WORK Mommy,wink..lol Thank you!

CantonGal Joined Thu 07/10/08 Posts: 124	Sun 08/10/08 06:36 PM Edited by CantonGal on Sun 08/10/08 07:14 PM
My daughter and son are everyday: a mirror, a reminder, a gift, a surprise, a challenge but moreso a heart within my own. That will not let me die or give up, that gives me strength that i normally would never realize and that makes me feel things i didn't know i could feel. Great write! Thank you. Your welcome! That is why God gave us the gift of children.

CantonGal Joined Thu 07/10/08 Posts: 124	Sun 08/10/08 06:38 PM
Thank you mteagle, d4tc, and flame1cutie.

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sun 08/10/08 06:52 PM
Truly tender

CantonGal Joined Thu 07/10/08 Posts: 124	Sun 08/10/08 07:20 PM
Truly tender Thank you, Angel. I love reading your writing.

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Mon 08/11/08 05:31 PM
That was beautiful Mandy. Our children will always remain the light of our eyes. Nicely written.

CantonGal Joined Thu 07/10/08 Posts: 124	Mon 08/11/08 07:49 PM
That was beautiful Mandy. Our children will always remain the light of our eyes. Nicely written. Thank you, Robert!

seena Joined Fri 07/25/08 Posts: 83	Mon 08/11/08 07:58 PM
very good. hugggggggsssssss

CantonGal Joined Thu 07/10/08 Posts: 124	Mon 08/11/08 09:29 PM
very good. hugggggggsssssss Hugs to you!!!

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