Topic: my man
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Thu 01/18/07 10:12 AM
It's six am
The days begun
I wake up....
From a dream of one
Man

On my mind
Day and night
I need to have him....
Hold me tight


When i close my eyes
You're all i see
Right here, right now
I need you here with me

michael1313's photo
Thu 01/18/07 10:17 AM
so who is it you are dreaming about?

TakeMeHome's photo
Thu 01/18/07 10:54 AM
ME!

Who do you think!

TakeMeHome's photo
Thu 01/18/07 10:55 AM
Hummm, Ive done that too!

Nice isn't it!

michael1313's photo
Thu 01/18/07 10:58 AM
but you are a cute woman...oh I'm so confused...lol...

Fanta46's photo
Thu 01/18/07 11:11 AM
nice poem sugar
short and sweet

Danh67's photo
Thu 01/18/07 11:56 AM
I can only wish one day to have some one want me to hold that much, Its
so hard to have loved yet never been loved

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Fri 01/19/07 11:51 AM
Good work Jen, rapping it all up in a short one! Keep it going great!
;)

TxsGal3333's photo
Sat 01/20/07 06:24 AM
nice poem

Cybear's photo
Sat 01/20/07 10:08 AM
Wow!very surreal.Such a sweet dream which delivers hope and reassures
you that this love will once again return into your life.I envisioned
you awakening with your hands gently placed upon your shoulders as if
you were hugging your Man.Locked within eternal bliss with your
lover.This Rocks!gurl.I Luv it.Keep up the great work.Your
friend.Godspeed!Cybear.

kojack's photo
Sat 01/20/07 10:12 AM
awesome poem jen