Topic: Please
rebel58's photo
Tue 09/16/08 03:30 PM
Please look and tell me what you think. Do I need to change something in it?

Jill298's photo
Tue 09/16/08 03:36 PM
looks good... welcome to the site. flowerforyou

RKISIT's photo
Tue 09/16/08 03:38 PM
two pictures are too far away,other than that,thats that:smile:

no photo
Tue 09/16/08 03:39 PM
Really nice profile- I enjoyed reading it- Maybe a couple more pics....I like it!love

chuck366's photo
Tue 09/16/08 03:39 PM

Please look and tell me what you think. Do I need to change something in it?


PERFECT.

Bardicverse's photo
Tue 09/16/08 03:43 PM
Hiya =)

A few suggestions, if you don't mind - of course you don't you asked for it. ;)

Paragraphs tend to be easier on the eyes. Try breaking up that giant single paragraph with the enter key a few times. Take a look at my profile to see how I laid it out. People on the internet are like voluntary A.D.D. victims. =) Space it out and it'll be an easier read.

Your one close up picture is kinda grainy/pixelated and it's hard to see much of your features due to that. See if you have one that doesn't get all distorted when you upload it =)

Farm girls and country girls are awesome, btw =) Welcome aboard the crazy train!


no photo
Tue 09/16/08 03:56 PM
A bit wordy but the pics are great!love