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AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 06/02/09 08:15 AM
~ WHERE IT WILL ~ Flowing, flowing, going south, a little east, a little west. Shimmering down. Settling not, destination now. A river flowing, moving, moving where it will; nature hears it filling spaces, filling places, with its refreshing liquid, clearing the thicket, quickly rolling on, rolling on as it comes upon unfamiliar ground. It stops, but for a moment, pausing to listen to the sound of this, of that, of blissful memories imprinted temporarily within the hint of time. No reason or rhyme and the river keeps on, without ever ever wondering why. ~© JDS 06/02/2009~

wannacuddlewthme Joined Tue 11/11/08 Posts: 7110	Tue 06/02/09 08:38 AM
Amazing

Gossipmpm Joined Tue 03/03/09 Posts: 19414	Tue 06/02/09 08:49 AM


MadameGeek Joined Wed 01/23/08 Posts: 64	Tue 06/02/09 09:23 AM
~ WHERE IT WILL ~ Flowing, flowing, ... rolling on as it comes upon unfamiliar ground ... and the river keeps on, without ever ever wondering why. ~© JDS 06/02/2009~ A magnificent analogy for the simple embrace of life and its confident unquestioning of its destination, purely and simply following its flow to where it must.

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Tue 06/02/09 12:22 PM
To life and our journeys and destinations. Beautiful J...

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Tue 06/02/09 04:35 PM
~ WHERE IT WILL ~ Flowing, flowing, going south, a little east, a little west. Shimmering down. Settling not, destination now. A river flowing, moving, moving where it will; nature hears it filling spaces, filling places, with its refreshing liquid, clearing the thicket, quickly rolling on, rolling on as it comes upon unfamiliar ground. It stops, but for a moment, pausing to listen to the sound of this, of that, of blissful memories imprinted temporarily within the hint of time. No reason or rhyme and the river keeps on, without ever ever wondering why. ~© JDS 06/02/2009~

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 06/02/09 04:37 PM
Amazing Ty wanna I appreciate that!

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 06/02/09 04:38 PM
Thanks for the love Tammy

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 06/02/09 04:43 PM
~ WHERE IT WILL ~ Flowing, flowing, ... rolling on as it comes upon unfamiliar ground ... and the river keeps on, without ever ever wondering why. ~© JDS 06/02/2009~ A magnificent analogy for the simple embrace of life and its confident unquestioning of its destination, purely and simply following its flow to where it must. (((MG))), have you ever thought of critiquing poetry, movies or books for a living? Thanks sweetie.

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 06/02/09 04:44 PM
To life and our journeys and destinations. Beautiful J... Thanks P

Lilypetal Joined Wed 02/25/09 Posts: 4052	Tue 06/02/09 04:44 PM
Beautiful!

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 06/02/09 04:44 PM
~ WHERE IT WILL ~ Flowing, flowing, going south, a little east, a little west. Shimmering down. Settling not, destination now. A river flowing, moving, moving where it will; nature hears it filling spaces, filling places, with its refreshing liquid, clearing the thicket, quickly rolling on, rolling on as it comes upon unfamiliar ground. It stops, but for a moment, pausing to listen to the sound of this, of that, of blissful memories imprinted temporarily within the hint of time. No reason or rhyme and the river keeps on, without ever ever wondering why. ~© JDS 06/02/2009~ Thank you, as always MM

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 06/02/09 04:45 PM
Beautiful! Ty Lily...so is your write!

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Tue 06/02/09 05:40 PM
really nice angel

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Wed 06/03/09 05:55 AM
really nice angel ty kc

MzEm Joined Wed 03/25/09 Posts: 1558	Wed 06/03/09 06:10 AM
~ WHERE IT WILL ~ Flowing, flowing, going south, a little east, a little west. Shimmering down. Settling not, destination now. A river flowing, moving, moving where it will; nature hears it filling spaces, filling places, with its refreshing liquid, clearing the thicket, quickly rolling on, rolling on as it comes upon unfamiliar ground. It stops, but for a moment, pausing to listen to the sound of this, of that, of blissful memories imprinted temporarily within the hint of time. No reason or rhyme and the river keeps on, without ever ever wondering why. ~© JDS 06/02/2009~ Great write, it is always good to see (hear) you.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Wed 06/03/09 01:33 PM
((( Angel )))) You as is your soul,, Timeless

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Wed 06/03/09 02:31 PM
~ WHERE IT WILL ~ Flowing, flowing, going south, a little east, a little west. Shimmering down. Settling not, destination now. A river flowing, moving, moving where it will; nature hears it filling spaces, filling places, with its refreshing liquid, clearing the thicket, quickly rolling on, rolling on as it comes upon unfamiliar ground. It stops, but for a moment, pausing to listen to the sound of this, of that, of blissful memories imprinted temporarily within the hint of time. No reason or rhyme and the river keeps on, without ever ever wondering why. ~© JDS 06/02/2009~ Great write, it is always good to see (hear) you. Likewise Emmy, ty

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Wed 06/03/09 02:31 PM
((( Angel )))) You as is your soul,, Timeless Hi (((D))) Ty.