Topic: unmatched
d4tc's photo
Sun 06/28/09 11:22 AM
See that clown over there
I am nothing like

He wears way too much
make up

I tone it down

You? Tone it down?
she said

Why wear make up at all
she said

was this not what I
should have used to
cover up regret?
I fret















by the made up
looks on our faces

I could tell
the truth was not comming out

any time
soon




for 12 years
they lied
a life


on the final day we looked eye
to eye for the first time ever


my hunch was
confirmed


her eyes
really were brown


pupils


dark as hell



LAMom's photo
Sun 06/28/09 11:33 AM
flowers

bgeorge's photo
Sun 06/28/09 11:38 AM
sometimes it's easier to just pretend til the very endflowerforyou

MadameGeek's photo
Sun 06/28/09 12:33 PM
"by the made up
looks on our faces "
.......
"for 12 years
they lied
a life "

Such a rich descriptions for deception and a powerful testimony to how we can see people as mirrors of what we ourselves want to believe.

Really good, sir!

kc0003's photo
Sun 06/28/09 03:23 PM
i like this... drinker

nvkikigirl's photo
Sun 06/28/09 09:33 PM
excellent piece.flowerforyou

lurchs_sister's photo
Sun 06/28/09 10:58 PM
This tells a tale that rings through my heart...brokenheart

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no photo
Mon 06/29/09 08:02 AM
flowerforyou flowers drinker

very nice write

AngelLight's photo
Mon 06/29/09 09:00 AM
Nice job Sweet J