Topic: Hard to comprehend
habitforming's photo
Wed 07/15/09 10:27 PM
Im a-
little bit hard to understand
a bit high maintenance
willing to give what I demand
dont have alot of patience
cant say where Im goin furthermore
I aint obsessed with knowin
Its enough for me
just to know Im flowin
dont need no guided tour
in the prison of the well -regarded
being socially incorrect
the meek are disinherited
unable to connect
Im here to play the jester
to a crowd caught in despair and you think Im hard to comprehend
Im a
little bit perverted
a bit high strung
alone at night Im sure
you get where Im comming from
my fantasies erotic
a slight bit too exotic
better than self repressed
or a borderline neurotic
on a scale from one to ten
I am the best time you'll ever spend
I try harder than any you could send
still you think Im hard to comprehend?

d4tc's photo
Thu 07/16/09 12:33 AM
Gave me a good description of who you are :thumbsup:


For some reason I feel like you want to say more. Maybe not in this poem but I sense you feel the need to say more poetically. Keep writing and thanks for sharing.

pkh's photo
Thu 07/16/09 03:44 AM
good write