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Topic: I Breathed You In
MzEm's photo
Thu 08/27/09 09:00 AM
I Breathed You In
Mary E. Martin

I breathed you in like a righteous joint
I took a toke of your smoke and got high
I breathed you in and you stole my mind
Took me on a trip to where I've never been
Psychedelic sights and far out sounds
Got me grooving to your movement
As I breathed you in

Your smoke didn't make me choke
Cause you went in so smooth
You essence was my blessing
As you took me higher
I had vision of space and held my breath
To keep you inside so I could
Float above the clouds in my altered state

I was feening for a minute but as I took a toke
My mind became hazy as you invaded my senses
I sat back enjoying the way I was feeling
High as a kite that caught a good breeze
You had me trippin’ as I inhaled who you are
This addiction to you is blowing my mind
You are my drug of choice any day any time

I breathed you in and closed my eyes
I let you linger in my senses and invade my mind
I knew I was hooked when I took that toke
And my mind began to fly taking me on levels of trips
As I took another toke from the perfection of your lips
Yeah this is it what I have been looking for
Addicted to your essence now you got me beggin’ for more

Ladylid2012's photo
Thu 08/27/09 09:02 AM
wow...flowers

Gossipmpm's photo
Thu 08/27/09 09:03 AM
Oh. Yea!!!:heart:


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Thu 08/27/09 09:09 AM
whoa<((L((O((V((E((@ laugh flowers

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Thu 08/27/09 09:20 AM
very nice flowerforyou drinker flowerforyou

MzEm's photo
Thu 08/27/09 09:33 AM
Thank you very much....

MzEm's photo
Thu 08/27/09 09:33 AM

Oh. Yea!!!:heart:




Thanks Tammy...

MzEm's photo
Thu 08/27/09 09:34 AM

whoa<((L((O((V((E((@ laugh flowers


Thank you Cy...

MzEm's photo
Thu 08/27/09 09:35 AM

very nice flowerforyou drinker flowerforyou


Thank you ma'am....

kc0003's photo
Thu 08/27/09 09:40 AM
..."I let you linger in my senses"...

nicely said
i like the spin you put on this one



flowerforyou flowerforyou

Differentkindofwench's photo
Thu 08/27/09 10:05 AM
Duuu-Dette ---- most righteous write! (Use Crush the turtle's voice from finding Nemo!)

brwnkimba's photo
Thu 08/27/09 10:41 AM
420Poet

That's some really GOOD $hitsmokin

MzEm's photo
Thu 08/27/09 10:52 AM

..."I let you linger in my senses"...

nicely said
i like the spin you put on this one



flowerforyou flowerforyou


Thank you Kevin, a little bit out of the range I usually write but I couldn't get the first line out of head...

MzEm's photo
Thu 08/27/09 10:53 AM

Duuu-Dette ---- most righteous write! (Use Crush the turtle's voice from finding Nemo!)


LOL Tnanks DKW....

MzEm's photo
Thu 08/27/09 10:54 AM

420Poet

That's some really GOOD $hitsmokin


LOL Thanks BK....

Fusion99's photo
Thu 08/27/09 12:38 PM
MzEm, you been breathing in alot of stuff lately it seemslaugh laugh I like this one, I feel like you took ME to a poetry house and I got to see you on stage. Great Job!smokin smokin smokin smokin smokin smokin

MzEm's photo
Thu 08/27/09 12:43 PM

MzEm, you been breathing in alot of stuff lately it seemslaugh laugh I like this one, I feel like you took ME to a poetry house and I got to see you on stage. Great Job!smokin smokin smokin smokin smokin smokin


Thank you my friend, I couldn't get that line I wrote when I commented on your poem...I am glad you liked it...

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 08/27/09 12:46 PM
Bravo, awesome what can I say but I think I got a hold of what ever is being smoked here shshshhs loved it....:thumbsup:

MzEm's photo
Thu 08/27/09 01:01 PM

Bravo, awesome what can I say but I think I got a hold of what ever is being smoked here shshshhs loved it....:thumbsup:


LOL that is some good stuff, it made from here to therelaugh laugh ...Thanks for the kind words...

ArtGurl's photo
Thu 08/27/09 01:09 PM
whoa! bigsmile

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