Topic: my souls rebellion | |
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found myself On the side of the road the other day .
With a Sad look upon my face, I was shocked ,stunned, and amazed. As my soul sped away. Wondering how this could be true, I'm not dead,I'm just with you. that's when I started to see. You've done nothing but complain, You could drive a shrink insane. Just like your doin to me My soul couldn't take it anymore , & kicked my *** out of the door, for putting up with you. Now I'm Hitchin for a ride Looking for my sense of pride and my soul that flew |
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i like the beginning alot, but the ending seems almost like it ends mid-sentence, or maybe not, souls can be peculiar, lol, . oh well, i did enjoy it tho :)
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Nice, I think I get it and I hope you find it.
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Thank u
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I think that it's time to go and to follow your soul!
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just a poem about how we can tend to hold on to relationships even though deep inside we know the truth of it
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Driving away from the wreck of the day the soul does
The message kinda sad, yet it made me smile |
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Edited by
insangel
on
Sun 06/17/12 02:30 PM
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Driving away from the wreck of the day the soul does The message kinda sad, yet it made me smile |
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Driving away from the wreck of the day the soul does The message kinda sad, yet it made me smile It reminds me of a day many years ago when I sat at the side of the Side of a road, cars passing by, I held my head in my hands and asked why. I did not get an answer because sometimes there is no question, it just is. Those are the Sentences you'll never finish. |
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Driving away from the wreck of the day the soul does The message kinda sad, yet it made me smile And do better Luckily we got us some bootstraps to pull up when we fall. Very nice write |
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Driving away from the wreck of the day the soul does The message kinda sad, yet it made me smile And do better Luckily we got us some bootstraps to pull up when we fall. Very nice write |
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enjoyed.
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