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Topic: The Rains of May
mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1532	Fri 07/20/12 11:55 PM
The Rains of May Can you feel the pain of my weary soul and the lifeless heartbeat that carry’s me through the day Is it a wonder how or why I continue to cry as if I can’t hear the things you say You love me need me cherish me and so many other things that makes it so hard because it’s you that makes me feel this way As much as it hurts as hard as it is I’m better alone than to feel the rains of May

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Sat 07/21/12 03:17 PM
One of those writes where you wish there was more to read..

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Sat 07/21/12 03:29 PM
Has anyone got a tissue ...This is a road I have traveled and it is a painful road...Just perfect Mig..

mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1532	Sun 07/22/12 02:56 AM
One of those writes where you wish there was more to read.. Ainjel . . . thanks, you know, maybe someone will write more. Change up what I wrote and make it personal for them. Has anyone got a tissue ...This is a road I have traveled and it is a painful road...Just perfect Mig.. Leigh, thanks to the kind words. You know sometimes the painful road leads you to paradise

Sugarbeee Joined Sun 07/22/12 Posts: 15	Mon 07/23/12 12:50 AM
I liked the title and the whole poem it was very good

Sugarbeee Joined Sun 07/22/12 Posts: 15	Mon 07/23/12 12:52 AM
i liked what you said about paradise cause cant know how to smile if never felt the pain to know the differnce

mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1532	Mon 07/23/12 01:51 AM
i liked what you said about paradise cause cant know how to smile if never felt the pain to know the differnce Thanks Sugarbeee

laura329 Joined Tue 10/13/09 Posts: 112	Sun 07/29/12 02:47 PM
I love the rain in July....warm and fun...sometimes being alone is what a person needs to be...regroup...restart and time to just be...

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